Welcome everyone!
I spent some time with family and friends over the July 4th holiday season. As a result, I didn't get much work done on Book 3 of the Hunter's Rose Series.
However, I've gotten back to the grindstone this morning, and have already made it to Chapter 12! I resolved all the issues with the combat scene I was struggling with earlier. Hopefully, I'll have some smooth sailing for a while.
Anyway, I hope your summer is going well. Stay safe and take care of each other.
Peace,
-Troy
Showing posts with label Combat Scene. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Combat Scene. Show all posts
Wednesday, July 8, 2020
Tuesday, June 30, 2020
Struggling to Rewrite a Combat Scene
Welcome everyone!
**WARNING, LIGHT SPOILERS FOR BOOK 3**
For the second time in Book 3, I'm struggling to rewrite a fight scene. The first time, was at the beginning of the book. It turned out really well, and I'm happy with it now. We'll see what future beta readers say, though.
Anyway, with this second scene, I'm struggling ever harder. In this one, I introduce a new monster-type. It's not something major, just something you would expect to find in this setting. None-the-less, I am not happy with the ending of it.
I'm wondering if I should just cut it altogether. The purpose of the scene is to introduce the creature, but I wonder if it even needs an introduction. Book 3 is the longest yet in the series, and it might be in the interests of brevity to cut it.
I'm not sure what I'll do at this point. Wish me luck!
Peace,
-Troy
**WARNING, LIGHT SPOILERS FOR BOOK 3**
For the second time in Book 3, I'm struggling to rewrite a fight scene. The first time, was at the beginning of the book. It turned out really well, and I'm happy with it now. We'll see what future beta readers say, though.
Anyway, with this second scene, I'm struggling ever harder. In this one, I introduce a new monster-type. It's not something major, just something you would expect to find in this setting. None-the-less, I am not happy with the ending of it.
I'm wondering if I should just cut it altogether. The purpose of the scene is to introduce the creature, but I wonder if it even needs an introduction. Book 3 is the longest yet in the series, and it might be in the interests of brevity to cut it.
I'm not sure what I'll do at this point. Wish me luck!
Peace,
-Troy
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